my cool writing task

     

In these 2 week I have been working on a writing task it was called show don't tell. It was a really good task we had to pick one athlete but it can't be Mr bolt so i choose Wallace Spearmon. He was a really cool person to write about it was so hard to write but then i got there at the end. here is a photo of him    

Andrew Fifta

this week in rm 2 we had a task the task was to pick two people out of the presentation(Andrew Fifta or Paris Goebel) i choose Andrew Fifta here is my paragraph. Andrew Fifita is a famous NRL(national rugby league ) player. He played for the Western Tigers for the 2010-11 season. Then he played for the Cronulla Sharks. He was born in Blacktown,New South Wales,Australia. He represented Tonga, Indigenous All Stars,City New South Wales  Andrew Fifita has played for a lot of different teams in his rugby career.
  

my fragments & sentences

                 
this is my writing task from this term and i finally finished this task it was a little bit challenging so I  had a little bit of help by my friend hopa he helped me with the last one because it was a bit hard to thing of what it but at the end it was finish.

letter to Mrs tapuke

My name is Filipe and i am tongan,samoan and I was born in New Zealand I have 2 brother and 1 sister.I real like hanging out with my family and i like going to the gym down at the pool.I like my new teacher Mrs tapuke and that I am a year 7. But I dislike that it is a bigger block.I really like it when teachers comment on my blog because it lets me know that I can make my post a little bit better.I would like Ms Tapuke to know that i am good at maths.

Yours sincerely,

Filipe

I wrote this letter to tell my literacy teacher Mrs tapuke about me