my cool writing task

     

In these 2 week I have been working on a writing task it was called show don't tell. It was a really good task we had to pick one athlete but it can't be Mr bolt so i choose Wallace Spearmon. He was a really cool person to write about it was so hard to write but then i got there at the end. here is a photo of him    

letter to Mrs tapuke

My name is Filipe and i am tongan,samoan and I was born in New Zealand I have 2 brother and 1 sister.I real like hanging out with my family and i like going to the gym down at the pool.I like my new teacher Mrs tapuke and that I am a year 7. But I dislike that it is a bigger block.I really like it when teachers comment on my blog because it lets me know that I can make my post a little bit better.I would like Ms Tapuke to know that i am good at maths.

Yours sincerely,

Filipe

I wrote this letter to tell my literacy teacher Mrs tapuke about me